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   [Consider this brief excerpt from p.186-187 of TBOTW  (see at right) with red for dialog, blue for the (only 1) person’s thoughts, black for ordinary narration, and green for the infrequent (“future suggesting”) interloping narrator.]

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   Facing the ocean on their left, an early sun announced the first day of the rest of their lives

   Would they live together and die together in a new world? If so, for how long? The answer, Michael suspected, wouldn’t be simple. But never would he have suspected the path that lay ahead.

    But he was with Triana, and both had survived unhurt…and that was enough for now…

   ….

   “Okay, let’s go over everything,” he declared. “We’re not on Earth because–

   ….

   “Gravity and air seem the same,” added Triana. “And the birds–“

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